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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Tue Jul 20, 2004 9:02 am

Well, I can see that you know how to touch an heart.

It is great, and well written.

I love what I read.

You did a perfect work with your song.

Sivan Very Happy smiley face
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Thu Jul 22, 2004 12:21 pm

The sentiment is compelling, but I was waiting for some revelation, some nuance to the Elrond/Arwen er relationship that I'd never noticed before. Instead, it almost read like a romance. And the word "angel" bothered me a bit. Are there angels in Tolkien's universe? This poem might work better as an original piece, rather than a Tolkien fanfic.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Oct 22, 2004 12:57 am

I did not see the relevance to ME. Although it is a good piece, on its own. I agree with Viv. Good original. Thank you for sharing, though.
 
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