Reviews for "The King's Vineyard"

Tue Jul 20, 2004 5:33 pm

I love stories with Thranduil. Look foward to seeing you update.

Fri Jul 23, 2004 12:32 pm

It's great already. I love how you described Thranduil, he came across very regal and noble. Fantastic. Keep up the good work!!

Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:55 am

This is a good story. I don't usually like plots with non-con as part of the plot but that part was not too graphic. I like the descriptions of the wine making though and the slow build up to what I imagine will be a romance between Thranduil and this OFC. I like the various descriptions of Thranduil. I'll be interested to see how that turns out.

Sat Sep 25, 2004 10:55 am

This story is so intriguing and enchanting. I love the characterizations/personalities that you've given your characters. The setting that you've created, has given me a very clear picture of Cella's world.

I loved the latest chapter, and I am hoping that Gorst's "kinfolk" will not cause trouble for the elves, Cella, and her uncle Dwain. Will there be trouble in paradise? I can't wait to find out!

Update soon,

Michelle
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Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:50 pm

I've been reading this as you've been posting and meaning to add another review. I've enjoyed how you've built this environment and the characters slowly. I liked this chapter so much as I was reading the conversation about 'elf-magic' that I was saying to myself "No more putting it off--review this one!" And then I got to the last line! That was a surprise! I mean obviously I saw things leading here, but I didn't expect it right then. Somehow not expecting it made that kiss seem very passionate. I am very anxious to see how C. will respond to that. Update soon.

Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:31 am

Well, well...I certainly did NOT see that coming. What a surprise! So, he knew exactly what she meant when she asked for that kiss. I loved how that scene played out. Romantic, and so sweet. And to end the chapter where you did was absolutely brilliant. You've got great timing...I'm definitely eager for the next chapter Very Happy smiley face

I can't wait to see what happens in the aftermath of "the kiss."

Love the story, update soon

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face

Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:09 pm

Grrrrr...you and these cliffhangers!!! I can't believe Cella's sudden boldness...might it be an affect of too much wine?? Ohhhh...will she remember what has happened, when she wakes up?? Or will Cella get what she is seeking? Smokin' smiley face

And, what did the king mean when he told her "not here, not like this?" Ooooooo...the possibilities!

Keep updating!

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face

Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:28 pm

Wow, that was bold of her. But I am very relieved that she didn't react badly to Thranduil because of what the man did to her and the gossip. Post again soon. I'm dying to see how Thranduil reacts.

Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:51 pm

Poor Uncle Dwain Sad smiley face

And to think that Cella could have been killed if she had not been gotten drunk and went to sleep in Thranduil's bed. Wow, what a close call! But where is Thranduil, now? What did that dream signify? Did the King call to her in her mind, or was her really there with her? She said that she had not called out to him, so does that mean that he was in the room with her...without her knowledge? Hmm, very interesting Hmmm smiley face

Another thing...how did the fire start? Was it set on purpose, or was it an accident? Ohhhh...I need answers! Very Happy smiley face

Fantastic update, keep up the good work Wink smiley face

Michelle...

Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:16 pm

Wow! I'm glad everyone is safe. I am dying to see how the fire was set and how Thranduil is going to react when he finds out where Cella was. Update soon.

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