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picara
Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
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Sat Oct 16, 2004 8:42 pm
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| I must admit that I am drooling a little at the idea of riding a horse pressed against Thranduil's chest. I really like that image. He could not have missed the tension that created in her. This slow dance is sooo delicious. Update soon. |
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Allyssa
Joined: 08 Jul 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Texas
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Tue Oct 19, 2004 6:55 pm
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| I absolutely love your story so far. I've been eagerly awaiting each new chapter and can't wait to see how it all plays out. Great job! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 10:43 am
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Go Cella! I'm so excited about Cella's newfound boldness! I love it. I can't believe she's finally opening up about her feelings...and discovering that she is grown enough to make decisions about the relationships in her life. I loved Thranduil's reaction to Cella...I can't wait to find out how this conversation that they are having will unfold. 
Fantastic chapter! Update soon...
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picara
Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
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Mon Oct 25, 2004 8:03 pm
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| The steamy, deliciousness continues. I love the way she tempts hims and he tries to resist. I can hardly wait until he falls. Update soon. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Mon Oct 25, 2004 9:25 pm
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Cella really is spreading her wings, isn't she. I'm sure Thranduil had no clue that little Cella could be so persistant. The ending was so sweet...persistance really does pay off
Loved the chapter, update soon...
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 10:20 pm
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So she's decided to work on him subtly...very good idea! I don't see him giving in to her anytime soon, even though she is making progress. But who knows, right?
And whose clothing did she receive? Thranduil said that it had only been worn once, so now I'm wondering, who the clothing belonged to?
Very nice chapter! Update soon...I'm very anxious to find out how she makes out in her new home...
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Texasgirl
Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Sun Oct 31, 2004 2:31 pm
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Wow - I really like this story! I am surprised beacuse usually I stay away from older elf fics (i.e. Thranduil, Elrond, Celeborn, ect.), but this is great! If you could make some *serious* action happen soon, that'd be cool!
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AzureDragoness
Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Thu Nov 04, 2004 5:53 pm
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! 
I likie. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 11:35 am
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Your descriptions of Thranduil's home were amazing. I loved Cella's reaction to her rooms...she seems so innocent and fresh to everything that has occured. When Thranduil healed her, I thought Cella was going to become extemely bold and try to kiss him...guess not. Not yet, anyway.
Great chapter! I can't wait to read about the feast. Update soon, and keep up the good work!
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picara
Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 5:56 pm
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| I like the description of the Elvenking's Halls and her reaction to them. Continuing to enjoy the story with anticipation! |
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