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Snugly
Joined: 27 Apr 2004
Reviews: 3
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Sat Dec 04, 2004 4:30 am

Hi again! I wanted to say again how much I am enjoying this story. I love your portrayial of Legolas. He is a refreshing change--so full of life and whimsical and yet believable as an elf. I love how he is so involved with his father's love life--he does a great job setting the scene. Now please stop teasing us and have the elf king act on the wonderfull oppourtunity that is presented to him.

Please don't keep up waiting much longer!
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Dec 04, 2004 7:06 pm

And the tension continues to build! I hope he uses his teeth Very Happy smiley face

*crosses fingers* Please, oh PLEASE, let him use his teeth. Twisted Evil smiley face

Great chapter,

Michelle...
 
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
Sun Dec 05, 2004 9:41 pm

I absoluetly love Legolas! he is adorable! however...i find it a little odd that cellas keeps up her advances even after she learns that leggy's mom 'died'...very persistent! hmmmm.....reminds me of, well, me...................

TG
 
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Thu Dec 09, 2004 7:20 pm

Haven't reviewed in a while. Just wanted to say I am really enjoying this, especially the game Legolas is playing. You are killing me with the suspense. I hope Thranduil is too tempted this time.
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:08 pm

Fantastic chapter! I absolutely love the interaction in this scene between Thranduil and Cella. The flirtatious banter is great. Cella is finally getting what she's been wanting (I hope Very Happy smiley face ), and I'm really anxious to see how it all plays out. Great job on this chapter, as usual! I love, love, love this story. It's fabulous Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Fri Dec 17, 2004 5:41 pm

No holiday updates? Dratit! *gumbles* Oh well... you DID give us this bit, so I suppose you can be forgiven *grins* Happy Christmahannukwanzika! May yours be restful Very Happy smiley face
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Dec 18, 2004 11:51 am

Oooohhh, great chapter! Now, I'm curious as to who is at the door...Very Happy smiley face

Fantastic work! I can't wait for the next update!

Michelle...
 
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
Tue Dec 21, 2004 7:49 pm

oh my god! please continue! and what does thranduil think about cella? i mean, really, what are his thoughts on her as a person, a mortal, and now his lover?
 
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:24 pm

I'm so glad they finally got together but leaving us wondering who is pounding at the door is typically cruel. Very Happy smiley face It cannot be good.
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Fri Jan 07, 2005 11:54 am

Hello, and Happy New Year!

I just read chapters 35 and 36, and they are absolutely fantastic! Cella's thoughts on her newfound womanhood are so sweet and endearing. I really liked the part when you wrote about how her senses seemed to be heightened after her night with Thranduil, and how she somehow thought that she would look different after what had occured. That was so sweet. Cella is such an endearing character-- you can't help but wish her the best of luck in her persuit of Thranduil.

Thank you for including the background of the relationship between the elves and the dwarves. It will be interesting to see how Cella reacts to the dwarves, now understanding that their relationship with the elves is strained. I wonder will she have an automatic distrust of them because of the elves feelings towards them, or will she develope her own opinion of the dwarves.

Legolas's behaviour is hilarious. He certainly seems intent on getting these two together. I hope he's successful.

I can't wait to see the first interaction between Cella and Thranduil since their night together. This should be good!

You are doing an amazingly FABULOUS job with this story! Smile smiley face Each chapter continues to intrigue and entertain, and I hope that it continues. Smile smiley face Keep up the great work! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...
 
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