Reviews for "The Silver Serpent's Kiss"

Tue Jul 20, 2004 8:55 pm

Looks like a promising beginning to what should hopefully be an engaging story. The only criticism that I have to offer that there are several sentences in the first paragraph that are a wee bit too long. And that unfortunately distracts from the narrative. I will definitely be interested in reading about a culture that typiclly is not explored in fanfiction.

Fri Jul 23, 2004 2:01 pm

There really isn't enough here to get a sense of whether I'm liking it or not, but I'll put it on my Watch list and check back. Yay you for writing about Harad, tho!

Wed Aug 18, 2004 8:18 am

THe prologue was amazing! A very original idea - you catch the reader's attention from the start. The beginning of a magnificent epic! Very Happy smiley face

Fri Sep 03, 2004 1:50 pm

A very unusual idea, my curiousity has been touroughly roused. I hope this will be as epic as you plan.

As for all those warnings in the intro... just makes it all the more promising (far to many people hide the gory, visceral bits). Twisted Evil smiley face

Mon Sep 25, 2006 9:10 am

Me likes. Update soon, please. Very Happy smiley face

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