Reviews for "The Return of the Pilgrim"

Wed Jul 21, 2004 6:46 am

You did a nice job of portraying Gandalf's fall at Moria. However, you may want to double check the use of the word "stealth." I am assuming that you were trying to convey the point that Gandalf's life was stolen based on these two lines of your poem -

Your life was forfeit
Your life was stealth

If that is what you were attempting to do, then the word choice should be "stolen." If you were trying to say that Gandalf's life was one of secrecy and hiding, then "stealth" would be the appropriate word. However, it would not fit in with the context of what you had written.

Other than that minor quibble, it was a terrific poem.

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