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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003
Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
Sat Jul 24, 2004 12:08 am

Although it was your intention to give the reader some insight into the ME mindset, this piece of writing strongly reminded me of Eowyn. And considering her valiant deeds, she truly exemplifies the characteristics you highlighted.
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Sun Aug 29, 2004 7:33 pm

Amazing!
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Thu Jun 16, 2005 2:05 am

This could easily be broken into a poetic form. It is very close to a poem as it stands.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Jun 16, 2005 6:26 am

Wow! Um, that about sums it up. This was very powerful. I, too, thought of Eowyn at first, but it exemplifies the driving force behind all those fighting on the side of right. Very well written. It is lyrical in its poetry. I agree with KhazarKhum that it is close to poetic form, but I feel it makes a more powerful statement as prose. Thank you for sharing.
 
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