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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed Jul 28, 2004 5:05 pm
"But promises of a friend
Diminish deeply
By winter's end"

That sentence creates a powerful image.
 
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Hanasian

Joined: 06 Sep 2010
Reviews: 24
Location: Somewhere in Eriador
Sun Oct 01, 2017 4:29 am
"In this game of ring-around-the-rosy "

For some reason that line does not fit, in the verse or in the poem.
 
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