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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Fri Jun 04, 2004 4:30 am
Reallly beautiful yet so sad.. a very original idea! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Jun 11, 2004 8:29 am
Lovely! Utterly beautifully heartbreakingly lovely! That last line.... "In the morning I woke up." That just sums it all up. Very nice job. I rather like this particular idea, that there was love once but lost, and that it lay quietly for so long unknown in that little book. I also really enjoyed your characterization of Frodo, his reactions were spot on! Most excellent stuff! Very Happy smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:34 am
What a wickedly sorrowful story! How did you get through it? I do not care for hobbit stories as a rule, as I am obsessed with the Elves, but this was truly a great piece. You can read a lot into Bilbo's character later in life. I however do not feel Frodo's reactions were too feminine. I personally do not care for Frodo, as he comes off seeming the long-suffering hero constantly (and that mournful stare of his, brrrrr). However, this really hit me. Thank you
 
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Concetta

Joined: 22 Mar 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: Maryland, USA
Fri Jun 11, 2004 6:54 pm
That was beautiful and so sad! Crying or Very sad smiley face
 
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