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shireling
Joined: 13 Oct 2003 Reviews: 5
Location: Nottinghamshire. England
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Mon Oct 20, 2003 12:32 pm
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A Powerful story, beautifully told.
Thank you.
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Wed Apr 14, 2004 11:12 am
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Wow! I really am glad you wrote this out, it could have happened just this way and I thank you very much for this well told tale.  |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 2:40 am
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Wonderful and very sweet!  |
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004 Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Fri Jun 11, 2004 2:40 pm
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| Wow!. I'm speechless (and that's rare!)..Bravo, really, so well detailed and told. Gotta get me a kleenex. Thanks for writing a story I can read to my kids (the other three LoTR fans in my house). I can't imagine any other way this gap could have been filled. You've kept intact the bonds of friendship, love, and the overarching theme of doing right by others without regard for self. Again, BRAVO! |
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Reviews: 126
Location: UK
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 5:15 am
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| Beautifully written, certainly one of the best on this theme. Well done. |
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 11:08 pm
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| What a wonderful story. I, too, needed a tissue by the end, mostly because the faith and courage shown by the Halflings was so well represented, especially coming from Pippin, who is usually written as childish and silly. Your Pippin is child-like, but by no means the air head he's presented as in other pieces I've read. Faramir, too, as a character is quite impressively written and your text was clean (no typos, etc). I also liked your use of a somewhat older-sounding language. Many writers forget that these characters would not speak in a contemporary manner. They shouldn't sound like American twenty-somethings sitting in an all night diner talking to friends when addressing their king. Thank you for remembering that, and for writing such a great piece. |
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