Reviews for "Alliance"

Sun Nov 21, 2004 9:18 pm

I love Glorfindel and Erestor's plotting to help Elrond--they are truly good friends and this shows it well. I feel for Isildur's wife and son. That is so sad and I can't help but think it will be hard on Elrond when he hears as well. I hope G and E meet up with Celebrian on the road and get her to Imladris quickly. It will help Elrond.

You did a great job portraying Elrond as drifting through his pain--very true to life in such situations where everything you held as real has been challenged if not destroyed. Great chapter. Keep feeding your muse. I love this story.

Sun Nov 21, 2004 9:58 pm

*squirms impatiently* Must have next chapter... must know what guy in Misty Mountains is doing... must know if Elrond and Celebrian finally stop angsting and realize... well, of course I know the answer to that one, but still. Very Happy smiley face

More! More, I say!

Mon Nov 22, 2004 1:02 am

SpaceWeavil, I bow to your ability to run several quality fics concurrently- have a Beer smiley face

I am definitely looking forward to Celebrían and Elrond finally connecting! Keep up the good work on this and Bodysnatcher (which is turning out very interesting !)

Mon Nov 22, 2004 6:34 pm

Loved the conversations in this one. Particularly liked Cirdan's story about young Elrond (the drinking story and the one about him choosing his profession) and his easy assuption that Celebrian will be what Elrond needs. I loved, "“I knew you to be wise, Erestor, but I did not realise you were this devious.”" That was a great line!

Tue Nov 23, 2004 9:56 pm

so glad you keep posting new chapters! thank you! Laughing smiley face

Tue Nov 23, 2004 10:31 pm

Brillient Job! All around well written. Great characterizations. I'm eagerly awaiting more chapters Exclamation smiley face

Wed Nov 24, 2004 2:47 am

That was just beautiful. I loved the exchange between Celebrian and Elrond in her room. Their relationship is so well written... they both seem so shy and (this is a really bad word for this) cute. Almost like two teenagers, and then again not. Just as good as I expected.

I am glad you brought her there now. With Isildur dead and everything, he will need her. And I love the way the events go side by side, like in layers. It prevents the story from becoming fluffy (there is nothing wrong with fluffy though).

You are so very good at capturing moments, happy or sad. I am going to have to go and check out that Thranduil spin off one of these days. Very Happy smiley face

Happy writing! You rock smiley face

Thu Nov 25, 2004 2:03 am

I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this story very, very much. You've covered such a broad scope from the insecurities of the young Celebrian, through graphic (and well-written) battle scenes and the ensuing grief, to tender moments between the two soon-to-be-lovers.

Thanks for the attention to detail and such regular updates.

More please!

Thu Nov 25, 2004 7:20 am

I loved their meeting. Celebrian was just what he needed even at that tense moment when Isidur's man arrived. I'm so happy she is finally in Imladris and I find it very sweet how shy and tongue tied they appear to be with their little bursts of frankness. Great chapter. I'm dying for the next one to see how this develops.

Sat Nov 27, 2004 7:38 pm

Talk about a first kiss! In a rainstorm highlighted by thunder and lighting! THis is getting very interesting. Bravo, well done (like all your stories - do you ever sleep?)

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