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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004
Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
Mon Aug 23, 2004 2:31 am
Same as before, thhere are some flow issues. Stansas 1-3 need to be looked at. Please do write some more, thhey are good poems and I do very much enjoy them.
Luv,
Ur Samwise
 
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pipinheart
Joined: 13 Sep 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: USA,Ky
Mon Sep 13, 2004 12:34 am
You can see pippin is frightened of being without merry,he now has to face everything alone. You put a lot of feeling here,liked it very much... Smile smiley face
 
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