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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004
Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
Mon Aug 23, 2004 2:27 am

This is basically a good poem, but like most of mine, the flow isn't easy. Try finding lines that work more fluidly together...Lol I should take my own advice.
Luv,
Ur Samwise
 
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pipinheart
Joined: 13 Sep 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: USA,Ky
Mon Sep 13, 2004 12:32 am

Really heartfelt poem, I liked it very much...Good job.... Smile smiley face
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:07 am

I agree with Sam. Still, it's quite a good poem.
 
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