Reviews for "Naugrim"
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed Aug 18, 2004 4:39 pm
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Some instances of rough sentence structure (e.g., "Seeing as to how"; "the imagination department, as envisaged by the little prince"), but the tempo and atmosphere are pleasantly light. I'm still waiting on the dwarves, though.  |
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Mon Aug 23, 2004 2:13 am
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Sounds like this could turn into somethhing great. Keep going on this and I'll be back to reveiw again. Hope Leggy doesn't get into too much trouble.
Luv,
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
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Sun Mar 06, 2005 6:30 pm
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Nice! We don't really have too many dwarf stories around here. So far it's going good! Keep it up!  |
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