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MaglorRedeemed
Joined: 01 Aug 2004
Reviews: 11
Location: The land of Mormons, green Jell-O and Orson Scott Card
Sun Aug 15, 2004 10:08 pm
I really liked this fic. Smile smiley face Your grasp of English is very good; I don't think I noticed any spelling or grammar mistakes at all (at least no obvious ones!) Your characterization was great too (and considering how many people write Merry and Pippin off as immature little kids, this fic was a wonderful step away from that. Great job!)

One thing, though... Just for the record, Merry, Eowyn and Faramir were all healed by Aragorn in the Houses of Healing in Minas Tirith, something Peter Jackson didn't have time to include in the movies. It's a beautiful scene in the books, and I really recommend reading it. I'm not complaining about your version of things (for the movieverse, this rocked my socks. Who knows? Merry may well have recovered without Aragorn's intervention. Hobbits are great that way) I'm just sayin'. At any rate, I hope you write more. This was really enjoyable. Very Happy smiley face
 

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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
Location: 
Mon Aug 16, 2004 5:49 am
very nice, very sweet movieverse fic Smile smiley face Lovely exploration of the deep friendship and trust between Pippin and Merry. Well Done!
 
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pipinheart
Joined: 13 Sep 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: USA,Ky
Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:20 am
Really loved this story.. Smile smiley face You showed how much they loved and depended on each other. Neither of them are whole without each other.
Pippin clings to hope and will not leave merry... Love it Exclamation smiley face

Great job Very Happy smiley face
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Sun Jan 09, 2005 7:12 pm
What a nice storySmile smiley face I always enjoy stories with some depth, and to find one with my two favorite lads! Well, I'm glad to see itSmile smiley face
 
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