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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Thu Aug 19, 2004 2:50 am
Thanks for the warning, but I just love death fics.

It was beautiful, and sadness. You rock smiley face

I love what I read, thank you!

Sivan Very Happy smiley face
 
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Thu Aug 19, 2004 8:25 am
Sniffle, wipe away tear.
Lovely.
But just so wrong!!!!! Legolas just can't die. He just can't! Wink smiley face
Beautiful writing.
 
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Ceana
Joined: 03 Aug 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Portland, OR
Thu Aug 19, 2004 10:03 am
I should so hate you, but I can't. Cry smiley face It's hard to hate someone while you're looking for a kleenex. Well done. Crying or Very sad smiley face Darn you!

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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Thu Aug 19, 2004 12:13 pm
That intro sequence was fabulous. But when you started recounting the movie, verbatim, I lost interest. The screenplay isn't nearly as elegant as that first original scene you wrote. Smile smiley face I would be interested in seeing your reinterpretation of the whole thing, with original dialogue and description and with Legolas's thread of hopelessness weaving into the whole piece, rather than just at the beginning and in the last few lines.
 
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Thu Aug 19, 2004 12:44 pm
Hmm...I really liked the beginning and the end. I´m afraid I have to agree with Viv -- you should´ve trusted your own ability to give us your interpretation of what happened, both in the battle and inside Legolas´ mind.

All in all; I liked it, but I would´ve liked to see how you would´ve described Legolas´ feeling of hopelessness.
 
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
Thu Aug 19, 2004 5:14 pm
I agree with Anna and Viv...and I do compliment you. It was great. And you had me in tears. Crying or Very sad smiley face *huggles Legolas plushie*
 
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kika988

Joined: 04 Apr 2004
Reviews: 18
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Sun Aug 22, 2004 5:01 pm
I have to agree with those who wish to see your own interpretation of the dialogue and such before the battle, but... WAAHHHH!!! *cries hopelessly* You know, this is exactly what I feared they would actually do to him in the movie, especially seeing that clip in the trailer that looks like he is hopelessly surrounded by orcs! I loved the writing though, it was beautiful Smile smiley face
 
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DarkElfChilde

Joined: 23 Aug 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: I'm located somewhere
Mon Aug 23, 2004 10:04 pm
I really liked this, it was an interesting short story. Cool smiley face
 
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