Reviews for "Remembrance"
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Philia
Joined: 15 Aug 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: Germany
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Sun Aug 22, 2004 4:10 am
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Uh, that was weird... did he kill himself in the end now? *ponders*
First ... I liked that story... I like Merry & Pippin fanfiction so this was a real treat  The inscription of the gravestone was beautifully chosen and I also liked Pippin's thoughts ... the way he lit two pipes and also the thing about Merry liking the sound of the waves... (totally can relate to THAT!  ).
Only ... the ending ... Pippin killing himself... I don't think he'd do that, it seems Out Of Character to me ... I can't imagine a hobbit thinking of really commiting suicide. Maybe just lose the will to live ... but 'actively' ending his own life ... *shrug* seems weird to me... so I think it didn't really fit. Or maybe you should have focused a bit more on how much he misses Merry to make like ... more ... logical?
Ok this was certainly not meant as offence, and I liked your story, really... the idea was great and it was written lovely... just that one tiny thing that somehow ... bothered me *lol*
Take care
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pipinheart
Joined: 13 Sep 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: USA,Ky
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Mon Sep 13, 2004 12:27 am
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Really, touching and a moving story... His love for merry was so deep,he had always been there for him but then he was gone.....
The gravestone sceene I really liked it had so much emoution in it,and his loss you can feel....
I wish you had explain why merry took his life,why was he desperate enough even though pippin was there... Pippin wanting to take his life after loosing his merry,him wanting to go home to his brother,made me feel so sad. Then it was like merrys ghost was telling him not to abandon his life so freely.... I loved it!
Great job..... Keep up the writing.... |
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Fri Oct 15, 2004 10:34 pm
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| Thanks all. |
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