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Elennare

Joined: 25 Aug 2004
Reviews: 6
Location: Edinburgh, UK
Wed Aug 25, 2004 6:23 pm
An interesting start, I look forward to reading more. Don't you dare kill Eomer though.

"quietly pinning a letter to Imrahil and Lothiriel’s brothers" - sorry to nit-pick, but should it maybe read "penning"?
 
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Artanis
Joined: 08 Mar 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: USA
Thu Aug 26, 2004 12:32 am
I've been reading this story for awhile over on fanfiction.net, and I love it! Great story with interesting twists!

Not going to spoil anything in the upcoming chapters - but I love how your story flows. Other authors have a tendency to stretch everything out and take forever for the plot to develop. But each chapter is something new and better! Very Happy smiley face I can't wait for the next chapter!
 
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Elennare

Joined: 25 Aug 2004
Reviews: 6
Location: Edinburgh, UK
Thu Aug 26, 2004 5:15 pm
I like Theodred's comments. Laughing smiley face

One think that confuses me, is why Eothain is allowed to remain in Eomer's sickroom when his wife and co-ruler is not (even after she has calmed down).
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:30 am
I just ran accross this, and have to say I'm enjoying it. I like the way you've written this, and it shows promise for a fascinating story overall. Dare I hope you'll update soon? Wink smiley face
 
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