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WebWalker
Joined: 18 Sep 2004 Reviews: 20
Location: Maine - USA
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Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:17 am
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Absolutely fantastic beginning! I am hooked and now find myself HAVING to read the rest of the story BEFORE I can go to sleep.
You have some mean writing talent going on during this story.
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WebWalker
Joined: 18 Sep 2004 Reviews: 20
Location: Maine - USA
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Sun Sep 19, 2004 7:00 pm
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Your Erestor is absolutely fantastic! He is playfully hillarious in this chapter. Something that he does not get written much as.
Keep up the good work!!  |
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ilistine

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 137
Location: In the cottage nextdoor to Imedhuir Hamgeredis
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Mon Sep 20, 2004 10:46 am
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She put the entire occurrence down to a practical joker spiking the staff room water cooler room with a hallucinogenic drug
Oh to be the brunt of that joke at my work.
Very funny ending, I seriously never expected it to be like that. Poor Celebrian, for someone who is prone to pregnancy sickness the whole 9 months, I completely sympathize with her. And wow, that is alot of baby elflings.
Sad to see it end.
Thanks for the fun.
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Wed Sep 22, 2004 8:28 pm
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*gives in and falls to the ground, howling*
I LOVE IT!
Only the genius that is Haleth...  |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 6:56 am
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| Oh, my. I thought I left a review. Was browsing through your work again and saw this. *grin* Btw, I LOVED this big time. I was laughing throughout, it was a hoot! |
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EWimg

Joined: 07 Apr 2005 Reviews: 1
Location: any where thats home
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Wed Apr 20, 2005 4:43 am
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| she seems... oh, what's the word, up tight? like, dispite being in Rivendell, she still has her teacher side of her kind of taking charge. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sun Apr 23, 2006 8:09 am
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Absolutely fantastic, hilarious and instructive story. And, ah, what an ending. I love this Thank you for the fun!
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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006 Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
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Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:08 am
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| Very funny! I loved the whole cause/effect scenario you set up. Very well done! |
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torachan

Joined: 09 Feb 2008 Reviews: 1
Location: between a elf and a hard place
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 6:48 pm
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| 0.0 XD this has got to be the funnyist thing i've ever read!!! but its not just pontless mirth! i like how you gave it a resonable plot, and then wove the funny in! 0.0 i bow to your awsomeness! XDDD but pleeeeeeease write more, please??? i know its been like 2 years since you posted but, THERE ARE STILL LOTR FANS!!! do not give up hope! XD |
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lissaselves

Joined: 28 Dec 2007 Reviews: 42
Location: Right here!
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Sat May 24, 2008 5:46 am
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| OMG I couldn't stop laughing - and I'm so glad Erestor was finally lucky! Trojans in Rivendell ... *g* |
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