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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:39 am
Oh! That was... I find myself at a loss. I thought at the beginnng, it was Gollum. However, the sword made it clear he was not the narrator. Frodo was the next logical choice, but still not clearly. The poetry in this piece is awesome. The imagery frightening. VERY well done.

The only issue I have is with a couple of words, but since I am not sure of the exact definition of one of them, I can only surmise the meaning from the context. Other than that, I find it moving. Extremely. Thank you, very much.

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