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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sat Aug 28, 2004 1:24 pm

I really love this. I know I've read it somewhere before so you must have posted it somewhere else already. I think the concept of Legolas meeting a mortal as they are both children is fascinating. That is actually worked into one of my own stories as well. Well written. I love your stories.
 
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Sat Aug 28, 2004 2:51 pm

How absolutely delightful! Wonderful!

I loved how you let us follow the woman from her youth to her death, and how you end it with her daughter. Legolas as a child - so sweet! Very Happy smiley face

Also, I truly liked your characterisation of Thranduil. A stern and just warrior-king, and yet a loving father who can“t help giving in to his child.

Once again; lovely, utterly lovely!
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Sat Aug 28, 2004 7:56 pm

I have read this some place prior....it was lovely.
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Sat Aug 28, 2004 7:56 pm

I have read this some place prior....it was lovely.
 
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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Sun Aug 29, 2004 1:00 am

Sad, yet intriging and well written
 
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Tue Aug 31, 2004 11:10 pm

Wonderful story. Absolutely. You are an exceptional writer!
 
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
Thu Jan 13, 2005 10:59 am

A beautiful picture painted in few words. A gem of a story. Sometimes the briefest glimpse speaks volumes. Must go read more of your work.
 
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Silvae

Joined: 28 Nov 2004
Reviews: 35
Location: Lyon, France
Sun Jan 30, 2005 3:09 pm

Extremely touching... I think you're one of my fave Thrandy writers! Yay Very Happy smiley face ! Write more please...
 
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warriorelfmaiden
Joined: 10 Sep 2004
Reviews: 5
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Fri Mar 11, 2005 3:11 pm

Haven't read it all but LOVE it so far!!!!! Very Happy smiley face Keep writing and I'll be looking for your work.... Wave smiley face GREAT WORK!!!!
 
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Sommer
Joined: 10 Aug 2006
Reviews: 6
Location: Australia
Tue Oct 03, 2006 5:51 am

This is a beautiful story composed from much forethought, I think. I love that it remains concise the whole way through; you do not use words needlessly - this is a mark of a great writer. Congratulations on a wonderful piece.
 
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