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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Jul 08, 2003 7:50 pm
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| "A hoarse cry issued from her husband as the bond between them was severed by her death." ... yes! I know that the chapter was a tragedy (and I felt the pathos, believe me), but I was also delighted by your obvious knowledge of elves. Your research and skill come across very well. And of course, a viable family history for Legolas is certainly a good premise for fic. Please write more! |
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sheraiah
Joined: 16 May 2003
Reviews: 27
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Tue Jul 08, 2003 9:35 pm
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Viv said
I know that the chapter was a tragedy (and I felt the pathos, believe me), but I was also delighted by your obvious knowledge of elves. Your research and skill come across very well.
Wow, that's high praise, especially since I know that you know your Tolkien well, Viv. Thanks! |
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EDibble
Joined: 26 Jun 2003
Reviews: 17
Location: Hudson, New Hampshire, USA
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Sat Jul 12, 2003 7:49 pm
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| Your skillful descriptions of the events and reactions of the characters drew me into the story. I know a story is well written when I begin to feel as the characters feel. Great job, and I am looking forward to further chapters. |
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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
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Fri Sep 05, 2003 5:37 pm
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This is a wonderful story, I wonder what will be with Legolas now, without his nana. Keep going, I guess I loved all your writing.
Bless you |
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003
Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Tue Jan 27, 2004 8:35 am
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Heart-wrenching ... I read this some time ago and I couldn't help but going back to it and giving it another read ... and taking the opportunity to ask the author ... is this going to be finished? Please do!
It really is a wonderful story and your characters are so well defined and well portrayed. I love your Thranduil and I feel so much for him. He carries his pain in such a stoic manner, and yet we all know that if it weren't for the presence of that little baby, he would probably give in to despair and join his wife. I truly enjoyed as well the dream/memories about Legolas' birth, and the way that you have managed to present the relationship between Elrond and Thranduil without begin overwhelming to the main story.
Great job ... and I hope you find your muse and keep on writing!
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sheraiah
Joined: 16 May 2003
Reviews: 27
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Tue Feb 03, 2004 7:52 pm
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Thuriniel said
> Heart-wrenching ... I read this some time ago and I couldn't help but going back to it and giving it another read ... and taking the opportunity to ask the author ... is this going to be finished? Please do!
Yes, I will finish this and all my other stories. I was trying to write several at once and it became impossible to keep up with, so I have decided to concentrate on one long one at a time, interspersed with such short plot bunnies as will not leave me alone. Viv was so very kind and beta'd this several months ago, so it will be revised a bit before I write anything new on it. I plan to finish at least one other before I get to this one, however, so please continue to be patient with me. It'll be worth the wait, I promise! |
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CandissD
Joined: 06 Oct 2006
Reviews: 34
Location: Alabama
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Fri Mar 09, 2007 7:01 pm
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Love this so far - I hope you can add more soon  |
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