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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
Sun Sep 05, 2004 5:27 pm
This is a great story, but in a terrible need of a beta. It was difficult to get through for all of the typos and (few) grammatical errors. But the plot was great. I really liked it. Just get someone to look over it and correct some of your mistakes and this story will be wonderful. Wink smiley face
 
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greywonderer

Joined: 14 Jun 2004
Reviews: 16
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:12 am
I enjoyed your story very much. I loved what you did with Sam and how you let him vent his anger. I also enjoyed how well you incorperated the healing sleep into the story, but still showed what led to it being necessary. The bravery that they all displayed and the self-sacraficing that was done was very well written. Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much.
 
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