Reviews for "Fire"

Sat Sep 04, 2004 3:33 pm

I very rarely read hobbit fics but having read one of your stories before, I was looking forward to reading this one, and I was not disappointed Very Happy smiley face

I really sympathised with your characters, and the scene was very sweet and tender...plus your closing sentences were really moving Smile smiley face

Also once again I admire your writing a story in English - you did great!
Well done Very Happy smiley face

Sat Sep 04, 2004 6:18 pm

Proud momma can't help herself: Loved it when you first sent it, and it really needed very little tweaking! Wave smiley face

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Sat Sep 04, 2004 10:36 pm

Love it, love it, love it! Nothing like some good hobbit smut Very Happy smiley face

It was also very sweet Respekt smiley face

Sun Sep 05, 2004 7:22 am

Oh, most definitely hot! And sweet too! I think Merry and Estella are my favorite hobbit couple (blame Emma who made me write Estella for her fic). You just know they would be good together and that Merry would be a decidedly 'eager' lover. Hmmm... yes, indeed! A sweet little fic, just right to get my juices flowing on a Sunday morning over coffee. Bravo!

Mon Sep 13, 2004 12:07 am

This story was very lovely,and had a lot of emoution in it. You can tell the love they share and how it will always bind them to each other.
I enjpyed reading it,and it was easy to read as the descriptions made you feel and see the story... Great job,keep up the good storytelling....

Sun Feb 27, 2005 10:44 am

I always feel more emotional about any character from the fellowship, especially the Hobbits and I suppose its because we have such a clear understanding of their profound sorrow and what they have suffered. To see that interwoven into this little one chap fic makes me very happy because I've seen this done without ever mentioning the past and it just doesn't make sense to me. This was what it must have really been like for them, carrying on with life, and living and love in the wake of what they've seen. Very well done Eyborg and btw....smut Twisted Evil smiley face

niiiiice. The only thing that I had any issue with at all is that it would be nice to make the lovin more descriptive and a bit longer. That's something that comes to us all with practice, so grab a Hobbit and practise practise practise. Twisted Evil smiley face

Tue Apr 19, 2005 4:58 am

After I sent your pm, I checked the reviews for your stories, and realized that I haven't actually left you one... Surprised smiley face

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This is the first story of yours I read, some months ago already, and can tell you that I really enjoyed it! Very Happy smiley face

I loved the smut of course Wink smiley face

, but the emotions you pictured are also perfect!

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