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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Fri Sep 10, 2004 11:07 pm
The story seemes to be coming along. I can't wait to read more. Very Happy smiley face
 
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
Sat Sep 11, 2004 10:24 pm
This is getting very interesting. I want to know more about the relationship forming between Legolas and Rebecca Smile smiley face maybe even Boromir Smile smiley face keep it comming!
 
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Wraithform
Joined: 13 Sep 2004
Reviews: 3
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Sun Sep 12, 2004 9:24 pm
To the author:

I really enjoyed your unusual take on the overly abused "Person-From-Earth-Falls-Into-Middle-Earth" subgenre. Too often, the most ridiculous "MarySue" fanfic can come about as a result . I like how there is the character of Thomas to balance out the tension between the all-male, proper Fellowship and Rebecca. Now, I have one serious criticism--
From the time period that Thomas and Rebecca are coming from, right after World War II, I understand that the gender roles would still be somewhat traditional. And I do understand that Rebecca has just been in a car crash and has multiple injuries. But I implore you--make her a stronger character! The "I don't know how to pee in the woods, I'm just a girl and I'm weak & incompentent at everything" role is overabused as well. She should learn how to fight and use a sword too!
Okay, that's just my inner feminist jumping out, heh heh. Truly, the story is an enjoyable one so far. I figured criticism, when constructive, can only help those creative vibes continue. Keep up the good work! Wink smiley face
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:41 pm
*pokeprodjab* MORE. *flutters off*
 
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sat Nov 06, 2004 3:14 am
I'm enjoying this thoroughly. Very Happy smiley face
 
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
Sat Nov 20, 2004 1:36 pm
This is great! I'm enjoying this story so much! Now just hurry up and update again! Wink smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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RunnerBeast

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: WA
Mon Nov 22, 2004 4:34 am
I'm loving your story! I've been glued from the beginning and now that they have made it to elf territory - hey what can I say?! Very Happy smiley face You have incredible writing skill and your grasp on Tolkien book canon is refreshing! I love your original characters, and so look forward to seeing what happens next in there amazing adventure. Thank you for a wonderful read!
- J
 
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
Sat Jan 01, 2005 3:28 pm
YEAH!!!!!!!!! SHE GETS TO GO!!!! I can't wait till they all meet up again!! You are a fantastic writer I can't wait till the next chapter so update soon please!
 
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sun Jan 09, 2005 11:34 pm
Very cool..can't wait for more.
 
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:48 am
ooo I can't wait for more! Update soon! Very Happy smiley face
 
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