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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Fri Jan 21, 2005 11:38 pm
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OMG, I started to cry first when Boromir was killed, just like in the movie, and then when Rebecca realized it was him that died, I felt for her and began to cry, too!  But, please, write more soon! |
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Fri Mar 25, 2005 1:32 am
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Wow, you're chapters are becoming longer and longer, but I still love this story! Well done, hope to read more soon!  |
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:45 am
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I think I envy Rebecca....because she gets to be with all these hadsome men (and elves, etc)..lol! Can't wait to read more!
Also, I'm kind of glad you are changing the title of your fanfiction, it makes more sense now. |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:50 pm
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Wow this is getting real good! I agree with thegraybluebird I'm kinda envious of Rebecca as well although I'm glad I don't have to kill anyone  keep up the great work! I hope you update soon! |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:15 pm
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| OMGOSH IS SHE GOING TO DIE!? YOU CAN'T LET HER DIE!!! NNOOOO!!! oo I hope you update soon! |
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sat Apr 16, 2005 6:52 pm
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| Rebecca got stabbed in the back...literally! Oohh....this isn't going to go well for everyone who has grown fond of her. She won't die, will she? Anxiously awaiting more! |
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Neniel
Joined: 30 Dec 2004
Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:43 am
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Oh no! No no no no no no! Please don't let Rebecca die! I mean, it's like she can't die! Pleaeaeaease?
Seriously, though, I've been watching this story for quite some time now and I can't believe it's getting so good! To be honest, it started a bit amateur-like, but now... it's just great! There are still a few moments where the characters sound a little silly (sorry for that, I hope you don't mind, I'm just being honest about the first thing that came in mind when I was reading the chapters), but your descriptions are exactly right, the plot is just perfect and, well, your story just sucks the reader in it! I was more than pleasantly surprised that you decided to picture the ride of the Grey Company to Minas Tirith, it was so wonderfully canon I just felt like cheering!
In other words, I've come to love this story. It's fresh, it feels right and, in its own way, it makes so much sense that it makes it so much easier to picture it in you mind, to dream about it and to let it sip in...
No need for me to remind you, of course, that you've got us all standing on coals, so I'm begging you to update soon!
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Xenon
Joined: 19 Apr 2005
Reviews: 3
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Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:59 pm
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Wow, this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! I love the characters of Rebecca and Thomas, but please don't kill off Rebecca-it'll kill Thomas. But it will be interesting to see how Thomas will deal with Rebecca's hopefully injury (not death), and how Aragon will behave. I mean, he'll have to keeo commanding all the troops..., try and help Thomas and deal with his own feelings.
I can't wait till the next chapter. Please update sooooooooooon!!!! |
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Sun May 01, 2005 8:41 pm
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| Just got through Chapter 22...wow...I am really enjoying this story...well written and well done! |
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Xenon
Joined: 19 Apr 2005
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Sat May 14, 2005 10:08 am
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| I'm relieved that Rebecca's ok, but please update soon!!! |
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