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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004 Reviews: 47
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Sat May 14, 2005 10:22 pm
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Wow, this story is intense. You have a real talent for fantasy writings. Perhaps you should start your own trilogy someday.  |
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Laereth

Joined: 13 Dec 2003 Reviews: 16
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Tue May 17, 2005 3:37 pm
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A very nice story, I have to agree to what was said here earlier - that you have a refreshing approach to the "falling into ME" category. Though I find that Rebecca is a bit too emotional, she seems to just wait for an excuse to shed some tears. I mean, people usually don't feel very comfortable crying in front of strangers, but here she is, weeping all over the place.
Other than that, your story is quite captivating and nicely written. I'll keep reading it  |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Thu May 19, 2005 12:32 am
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| another great chapter! can't wait for the next one soo.. update soon! hehe |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sun Jun 05, 2005 12:40 am
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wweee you updated!!! as always another great chapter can't wait to find out how much Rebecca tells Faramir and how he deals with it! Hope you update soon!  |
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:03 pm
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*shakes head in approval*
You have my most sincere congratulations, because this story is turning out more than great! I don't know whether it's just me falling in love with it with each new chapter or if you indeed get better, but right now all I can say is WOW! It feels perfect and it has such a sensible and realistic approach to the whole subject, that I'm left in awe. You took the time (and talent!) to describe all the little things that most would have left untold or would simply pass by, (such as the matter of taking the horses from the harbors to the stables, the lack of food, the wearing out of the Ithilien rangers in their efforts to keep the main armies safe) and it gives a great sense of prospective to the whole story.
All in all, this is one of the greatest stories I've read in a long time! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:22 am
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OMGOSH that was an awesome chapter! I was sitting at the edge of my seat! I couldn't stop reading it! It's about 2:17 here and I'm about to fall asleep now that I'm done reading! haha I can't wait till your next update! Hope it will be soon!  |
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RunnerBeast

Joined: 01 May 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: WA
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:52 pm
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Wow - your battle scenes are incredible! Fun, fun! This has been a wonderful way to get another great perspective and view on the books. I'm totally enjoying your OC's... What is going to happen? Please don't kill them off!
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Viresse
Joined: 09 Jul 2004 Reviews: 4
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Sat Jun 25, 2005 4:18 pm
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I started reading this only a couple of days ago, and have raced through the 25 chapters. I (very) seldom like "dropped into ME" stories and though I have a few reservations about this one, I have enjoyed it a great deal. 3 reservations in particular: Rebecca's and particularly Thomas' fighting skills are a little too good for the short time they had; having the language of ME be English is stretching my suspension of disbelief a tad; and what I admit is a pet peeve -- Elrond, Elrohir, Elladan, Arwen are not elves, they are the Half-Elven. Tolkien never refers to Elrohir and Elladan as elves, for instance. But the story is well-written, the characterizations are good (thanks for getting Celeborn right!) and most of all, I could forgive a *whole lot* more to have Halbarad survive the Pelennor!  |
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005 Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Fri Jul 01, 2005 12:09 pm
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| Yay, You updated! I found this story a week or so ago and sped through the posted chapters. I'm really enjoying it! It's very diffrent from the stories I usually enjoy, but I like it! Keep going, and I hope you update soon! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Fri Jul 01, 2005 1:16 pm
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YES! they are all together again! I'm glad you updated even if it was long hehe i like em long though anyway I hope you update soon this is an amazing story I can't wait till they are all back home  |
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