Joined: 09 Jul 2003 Reviews: 45
Location: Illinois, USA
Thu Sep 09, 2004 1:15 pm
Let me be the first to review! I like the realness of this story and the way there is no simple solution. I so badly want to reach into the story and somehow make things work out, and there's just no way to do it given the personalities of the people involved. Poor Denethor!
--Rose
SpaceWeavil
Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Thu Sep 09, 2004 2:11 pm
I enjoyed this very much. It's a very uncomfortable story, in a good way. Your writing puts across the air of tension between them very ably.
Radbooks
Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Sat Sep 11, 2004 7:22 pm
Very enjoyable to read. Made me feel sorry for Denethor which is always very hard to do knowing the way he treats his sons later on in life. Interesting how he interacts with his wife as well. Nice job.