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Mitasova
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 13
Location: Russia
Tue Sep 14, 2004 4:14 pm
You know, sometimes I think that nothing new can be said about the Steward's family without becoming repetitive. But everytime someone proves me wrong with a new story, like you did today. Thank you.
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Tanya
 
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:57 pm
Wow. Very powerful. I'm actually stunned- in a good way. This shows just how very complex this character is and could be in the hands of a thoughtful fanfiction writer. The ending is so much more tragic given Denethor's noble motivations of Gondor and _both_ his sons.

The structure was very complex, too, but you pulled off the various timeframes deftly.

Brava!

Amy B.
 
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