Reviews for "Hay and Clover"

Tue Sep 21, 2004 12:59 pm

Very nice! Very Happy smiley face

We definitely need more hobbit smut on this site. Twisted Evil smiley face

Keep up the good work! Smile smiley face

Just one thing though: Why in Middle Earth was Clover sending Frodo her wedding announcement, if she wasn't inviting him to the wedding? Weird...

Wed Sep 22, 2004 1:55 am

Thank you, Eyborg! And to answer your question: Well, I think she just wanted him to know that she's married now. And I was highly tempted to figure out the face she made (or her thoughts) when she unwrapped his wedding present...*giggles*

Cúthalion

Sat Mar 19, 2005 7:26 pm

Another well written story. ^_^ I wish I could capture the feelings and emotions you do. You made it very touching, with a bit of...'spice,' shall we say. Good job.

Fri Sep 30, 2005 4:59 am

A wonderful explanation of the hows and whys behind Frodo's lifetime bachelor status. Very well written smut; realistic and avoiding tired cliches. Bravo!

Fri Sep 30, 2005 6:17 am

Oh That was so lovely. beautiful descriptions of the shire at harvest time and the hay barn. A wonderous first time for Frodo and a bittersweet end. Justa perfect short story. The wedding present was gorgeous. I enjoyed every minute of reading this.

Thu Nov 24, 2005 9:06 am

I saw this as the story of the day this morning while I was browsing and drinking my coffee. What a delightful way to start the day. - such tenderness, and so bittersweet at the end.

Thu Nov 24, 2005 10:25 pm

Wow! While I am not much into hobbit stories, this was delightful. And, it was so well done, I would hardly consider it smut. A very beautiful peek into a past that the true author left for us to embellish.
Thank you for sharing.

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