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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Mon Jul 14, 2003 4:50 am
Lyric and emotional, a very elven style to the words Smile smiley face Very clean and readable for what you consider to be a beta stage Smile smiley face The only thing that jarred for me, and it may not for others was the line about Arwen hating herself. I would have been tempted to use despair rather than hate in that context, but it's not mine, so make of my opinion what you will!

Nicely written, and well done Smile smiley face
 
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