Reviews for "Oak and Willow"
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SpiritoftheGauntlets
Joined: 05 Mar 2009
Reviews: 4
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:21 pm
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| Oh chapter 2 was brilliant! I loved the way you wrote this! I was just as confused as the elves were until I realized that it was the first moon rising! Brilliantly done! Wonderful! |
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SpiritoftheGauntlets
Joined: 05 Mar 2009
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Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:39 pm
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Wow! The chapters caught me up so much that I couldn't make myself stop to review! I love this! The way you write the characters here is refreshing and it seems so natural, too. The Silmarilion doesn't really go into too much detail about small events, but I get the feeling that this is the sort of thing we would see if it did.
I like the way Nerwen is struggling, it seems very true to her character given how young she is in comparison to her age in the war of the ring. I also like the way that you continue to call her Nerwen even though she is trying to become Galadriel. It shows, to me, that she has definately NOT gotten past what has happened. Celeborn is just awesome, too, beating her in their verbal wordplay without even trying. ^_^ Wonderful job! Can't wait to read more! |
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Last edited by SpiritoftheGauntlets on Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:51 am |
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SpiritoftheGauntlets
Joined: 05 Mar 2009
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Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:08 pm
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| Ahh! Don't stop there! Don't do it! Please! Although... now that I think on it, you could have stopped at a worse point. They could still be separated, for example. *squirm* Rrrrr.... but it's so good! |
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Adonis
Joined: 26 Dec 2013
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Sun Oct 11, 2015 12:10 pm
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| excellent! well done. a story worthy of the original, you really brought them to life, thank you! |
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