Reviews for "A Friend Remembered"
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
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Mon Mar 21, 2005 11:48 pm
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| I just ran accross this story, for some reason, I didn't see it the last time I scrolled through the stories. Great idea, and a well presented story. I do like the writing style. I have to ask, though, did you have this story betaed? I noticed a number of spelling errors, and some areas where it seemed as though a "the" had been left out. Some minor grammar and spelling corrections would make this story much easier to read. Other than that, it's overall a great piece. Props! |
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