Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Reviews: 29
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Thu Oct 07, 2004 3:33 pm
I like it, but that's just me; probably someone with more knowledge of the Sil would help you out more. All I can say is keep writing and have fun. It's your story.
Your friendly elf,
Dark Elf Childe
SpaceWeavil
Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Fri Oct 08, 2004 11:23 am
I'll be honest and admit now that I don't kow much about the story of Beren and Luthien, as its a long time since I read that part of the Silm, therefore I can't really say anything about canon or such. What I will say though is that I really like the language you use. It has a very dark and poetic feel to it, and is enjoyable to read, even for someone like myself who has no real knowledge of the subject matter.