Reviews for "Cold Are Those Tools"

Tue Oct 12, 2004 5:15 pm

This has so much potential! You write it beautifully but you are speeding through it too quickly and your readers are being left behind. Please slow it down and explore the range more.

The rebirth aspect is an interesting one to go with. It raises lots of interesting questions that I hope you will explore and answer! Wonderful idea here! This is one to watch! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:00 pm

Moralanqua said
> This has so much potential! You write it beautifully but you are speeding through it too quickly and your readers are being left behind. Please slow it down and explore the range more.
>
> The rebirth aspect is an interesting one to go with. It raises lots of interesting questions that I hope you will explore and answer! Wonderful idea here! This is one to watch! Very Happy smiley face

Nothing to add, Mora pretty well summed it up and I am of the same opinions

Inglor

Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:01 pm

Sorry, double post
Inglor

Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:31 pm

I passed this fic up before. My shame. It has a very intriguing air to it, surely. If you could linger more, it would be perfect. As is, it's a very entertaining piece.

Tue Jun 28, 2005 4:23 pm

Wow! THis is quite good! Wonderful depiction of Nerdanel and her inner conflict. Nicely done!

Sat May 25, 2013 6:04 pm

Aww, that's so sad... It was beautifully written though. The FEELS! So sad... Sad smiley face

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