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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004 Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Mon Nov 01, 2004 9:11 pm
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What a wonderful peace of work! 
Beautifully written, with detailed characterizations and such rich scenery that I felt like I had been taken to the forests of Mirkwood! I’m dying to read more and I hope to see an update soon.
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Thu Nov 04, 2004 6:03 pm
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| Wonderful. I smiled all the way through this, so happy to see her getting through to him in more than one way. And the idea that they could be interrupted twice in the same place--too cruel. Loved the image of might King Thranduil hiding in the bushes. |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 1:14 pm
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I was giggling to myself when they took off to hiding. And I agree with ellisk, it is indeed cruel. poor Thranduil has a rotten luck, he does! Fortunately the lass still has some sense in her head...
sort of.
Nice chapter. the subtle hints are a treat. This is, all in all, a dleightful story. |
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003 Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 5:26 pm
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Oh, you cruel, cruel author! What a cliffie!
This is turning out to be such a lovely story ... you characterization of Thranduil is so textured and realistic, thanks to the fact that you have taken your time to explain his situation. You do a wonderful job showing the aftermath of war ... victory, yes ... but at what price?
I laughed myself silly when the two lovers were discovered in the forest ... I'm hoping there won't be any distractions next time ! |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Wed Nov 17, 2004 11:30 am
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Sw, dearest, I am speechless.
Damn good smut.
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Wed Nov 17, 2004 2:15 pm
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Ditto...
I really liked the turmoil in Thranduil. Great Romantic Elf Smut. I like your physical descriptions, it left enough to the imagination without being technical and added to the romantic air. And Istel actually has a heart...
Excellent, excellent work
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Thu Nov 18, 2004 9:52 am
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You captured the turmoil of the new king superbly. Thranduil's struggles to overcome his heart's obstacles were conveyed very well throughout this fantastic story. I was so happy that the two lovers were finally able to be together, and that Thranduil had finally found peace of mind and peace at heart.
Beautiful story!
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Thu Nov 18, 2004 7:49 pm
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| How did I miss this chapter?! I only saw it today. Excellent. Well written. Very steamy. Yes, I've been reduced to sentence fragments. How pathetic. I loved seeing them get together and seeing his mother pleased by it. Great job. |
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Avaril
Joined: 08 Dec 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: Confusion
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Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:15 am
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WOW...already and I am on chapter two...just wanted to drop a note..complement at Thranduil's comments about no longer being friend and having to change...reminds me of Harry in Henry the V when he becomes king and he can no longer indulge in the follies of youth...
Very lovely.
Bird
(sorry about being so late finally reading your fics after your wonderful help...once I get started reading I can't stop... so I have to plan my readings carefully... ) |
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Avaril
Joined: 08 Dec 2004 Reviews: 19
Location: Confusion
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Sun Jan 16, 2005 1:07 am
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Very beautiful..."Thranduil hovered on the threshold, rubbing his hands unconsciously while he struggled to find a ‘casual’ stance." I loved this line the best...the thought of the young king, that would later turn into the Thranduil we all know and love, nervous and trying to "act casual" is quite endearing...
So you have found my weakness...mainly thranduil...wonderful story full of innocence and loss of such in a most delicious manner...(I like how she is the seemingly more experienced of the two at the end... )
Istel was wonderful...and I can completely understand her point-of-view...in fact all of your characters were beautifully written!
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