Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Wed Oct 20, 2004 2:33 pm
This is a nice piece. It's interesting to see a story written in second person. It makes it different, and you managed to keep it up throughout, which is great. I particularly liked the descriptions towards the beginning, of the oliphaunts and army of Sauron attacking 'as one large, menacing organism'.