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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Wed Oct 20, 2004 2:33 pm

This is a nice piece. It's interesting to see a story written in second person. It makes it different, and you managed to keep it up throughout, which is great. I particularly liked the descriptions towards the beginning, of the oliphaunts and army of Sauron attacking 'as one large, menacing organism'. Very Happy smiley face
 
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