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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
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Fri Oct 22, 2004 3:46 pm
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Oh! Wow!! I am so happy I read the highlight at the home page today and came to read this, you did an amazing job, trully touching!!
I hope someday we get to read the happy story for them, they certainly do deserve it!
Cheers to the nameless brave and to you for honoring them in such a wonderful story.
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
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Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:58 pm
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| This IS an amazing vignette...You have captured the desolation and fear and cruelty that comes with war. I always want a happy ending...it would be so very nice if they could have one. |
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004 Reviews: 46
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Mon Oct 25, 2004 3:24 am
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| Ohhhh.....that made me sob.... |
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 16
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Tue Oct 26, 2004 1:07 am
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| What a sad story, but then if you think about it, it can be thought of as happy. Two people finding each other at the worst of times. Excellent peice! |
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pipinheart
Joined: 13 Sep 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: USA,Ky
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:28 am
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This is a very well written piece. Very lonly and sasd,but war maaakes it that way. No one seemed to want to help,but she took the couraaage to help him... A great read...  |
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004 Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 8:56 pm
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| Very sad and very happy at the same time...I really loved this. Great job! |
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Sun Nov 07, 2004 5:10 pm
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Lovely, my dear!!  |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Sat Nov 20, 2004 6:59 pm
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Lovely little vignette. I always though Mians Tirith was built on a mountain of marbel, so the sight of dark earth seemed off--but that's a minor point.
And of course the bitches stole her food. That's what people do in time of war. |
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Liregon

Joined: 22 Nov 2004 Reviews: 4
Location: singapore
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Mon Nov 22, 2004 9:18 am
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| a fantastic and beautifully story. you captured all the emotions very very nicely! and made me sob. |
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