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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Nov 18, 2004 5:04 pm
Good idea! That is certainly a defining aspect of Legolas's character - the archer.

I think you might loosen up the language a bit, though, and fix that dialog formatting. It would make your story just that much easier to read.

Congrats on filing your first!!
 
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