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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
Fri Nov 05, 2004 11:27 am
Okay a review: liked it, could image the opening of the doors, sunlight streaming in and dust floating on beams of light, dust bunnies in the corners. Only concern was I don't know if I'd describe meduseld with brittle timbers as if it were fragile. I imagine the great hall as a symbol of strength. Must say, in a few words you painted a scene on the imagination, as much a visual description as an emotional feeling.
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Fri Nov 05, 2004 11:50 am
Another review. Smile smiley face I also like it. Especially the last line--Open every shuttered heart, even to mourning. That one brought tears to my eyes. Very powerful, especially in contrast to all the other, bright imagery.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Nov 05, 2004 2:46 pm
Hey, a third. I thought it was very nice. Very discriptive. It conveys a new beginning very adequately. You have no need to worry.

Thank you for sharing it.

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