Reviews for "Just before the end had come"

Sun Nov 07, 2004 2:31 pm

This seems a lovely piece but it appears that English is not your first language. There are many confusing grammar mistakes. You need to get this beta read.

As it stands, its a nice enough original ficlet.

Sat Nov 13, 2004 10:57 am

*sobs* So sad! While the writing could b improved, I loved the story, though I'm sad they died, at least they'll be together! *sobs*... Very Happy smiley face

Wed Nov 17, 2004 7:50 pm

This edited version just goes to show what your true ability was! Its simply wonderful, very poignant and totally original! Well done! Very Happy smiley face

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