Reviews for "Entulesse"

Tue Nov 09, 2004 2:43 pm

Way to go, Inglor!
I always like to see Finrod and Amarie. This little interlude in their married life is delightful, in the little hints of what happened before, in the way the background is all complete and in the way the two characters interact. Full points for characterization.

Tue Nov 09, 2004 9:43 pm

I really liked this story, good job! Wave smiley face

Wed Nov 10, 2004 3:38 pm

I have only the shallowest knowledge of the events chronicled in the Silmarilion and enjoyed this very much as it is not about them, but the relationship between Finrod and Amarie which is evoked clearly and imaginatively.

(few typos you might want to look to, Inglor, to make it perfect)

Sat Nov 13, 2004 10:47 am

AMAZING! The writing flowed across the page! Beautifully written, it lets us see their relationship in the background. WOW! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Nov 21, 2004 10:16 pm

Fabulous. What an incredible story. It was vivid and palatable like I was there with them. Inglor this is impressive! I felt like I could not stop reading until I had reached the end. The dialogue was authentic, I mean it was as if I was listening to these elves and hearing the years and emotions they had carried for so many ages in their conversation.

The romance was fresh and what a great perspective from a unique pov (being a male author), I found it believable and truly beautiful. The glimpses you gave me of their fea joining, the little lines like when she felt his fea brush in her mind gave me the chills.

Awesome!
Do we get anymore soon?
Man I wish I could beg you to write more have you written their first night together in another fic, I can't remember? That would be delightful.

Anxiously awaiting more from you.
Keek

Wed Dec 01, 2004 3:45 pm

Your play between physical and spiritual union was amazing, smut yes, but incredibly meaningful. I really liked how you were able to build on their past story with only chapter. You were able to pick the details that really matter and give your characters such depth and texture, I felt as if I had known them for a very long time. The metaphor of the music and Finrod's talents as a harper was simply beautiful.

A delight to read!

Fri Feb 11, 2005 4:53 pm

Wow - someone give me a cigarette! Smokin' smiley face

Good job, Inglor. I love your imagery. You have a real talent for that. I actually felt like I was out on the balcony with Finrod. Course I managed to distance myself from him when the hanky panky ensued (cause that's really twisted!) Back to your imagery, very very impressive. Even though I do not know the Sil, you gave me enough information to feel his pain. And the hanky panky was pretty good too! If the Sil read like this, I might have gotten past page 22! Wink smiley face

Sat Oct 22, 2005 12:51 am

This was so very nicely done...a peaceful interlude in a troubled time.
Thank you.

Mon Apr 10, 2006 10:26 am

Wow Inglor! I wish I had read this sooner. I am a big fan of plot driven stories that lead up to the steam and sizzle. I very seldom read anything that smacks of PWP. But this has changed my mind! You have a brilliant way of catching the essence of the characters with beautifully flowing words. I was enchanted. More please!

Siladan

Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:11 am

This is simply fantastic: the beauty and elegance of the language, the usage of music metaphors and the backdrop of the past make this portrayal of Amarie and Finrod fully developed, which is a great thing to convey in a short story. Thank you!

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