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Andreth
Joined: 25 Oct 2003
Reviews: 107
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Tue Nov 16, 2004 2:08 pm
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| Oh yay, giggle, and all the prerequisite fangirl Squeees!!!!! I'm all excited because you finally decided to post this one. I LOVE this story (and I don't say that lightly). The original was great but this rewrite is superb. A big clap on the back for you for the creativity and originality of this story idea. Elrond doesn't say a word, but it still the main player and gives us an oh-so-unique peek into his love life with Celebrian. And what a peek it is. Excellent job, Jane. I hope to see more stories from you soon. |
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Wed Nov 17, 2004 2:34 pm
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Oh how delightfully bent! Kinky Elf Sex, YAY! I agree, it took a great deal skill and imagination to show the emotions and actions of two lovers by using a monologue. A wonderfully fresh take on writing a sex scene. And Celebrian's vocabulary at the end, clever and incredibly sexy. oh, and thank you for the elvish terms for the naughty bits.
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003
Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Thu Nov 18, 2004 9:07 am
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Shocking, wicked and brilliant! I found this piece of writing extremely original, both in content and writing. The stream of consciousness technique sheds some light on what's happening between the two lovers, but at the same time it leaves quite a bit to the imagination. I think that this dark and somewhat "forbidden" excerpt from Elrond and Celebrian's encounter is even more accentuated by only having access to Celebrian's words/thoughs ... it's like looking through a small hole in the wall and having a limited perspective, rather than being the fly on the wall who sees everything. And sometimes less is more ... and this is one of those cases. I found this fic absolutely enthralling and it has shown me a whole new dimension of adult het. Thanks for being so bold to write it and sharing with the rest of us  ! |
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KhazarKhum
Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:39 am
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Ummm...I think I need to go and , umm, get something to eat. Wow.
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Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Fri Dec 10, 2004 9:35 am
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| I found this confusing, at first. Only because I did not read the summary, perhaps. Although it was definately OOC, it was quite a voyeuristic view. My only other comment is thank you for sharing. *slinks off to take a shower which has nothing whatsoever to do with having to go to work* |
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darkmalignity
Joined: 05 May 2005
Reviews: 6
Location: singapore
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Thu Jun 23, 2005 3:48 am
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*squees and breaks out the Rabid Fangirl act*
man, that was so funny! who knew evles were into RP as well?! *grinz*
the first time round i had no idea what was going on. and then i read the reviews and skimmed thru a bit, and then i got it. (yeah, i'm slow. shoot me) but when i read it the third time i got all her funny little jokes... man, i love her. esp the joke about inheriting the forsight from her mom and the joke about the peaches. so cute! its so tempting to use that in my own rp... hehe...can u imagine haldir breezing in and going "hi peaches" in front of everyone?! elrond will die of embaressment! and what a coincidence. this is the third fic i've read today about a cross-dressing elrond. hmmm...
another thing which was brilliantly done. i dont know if it's on purpose, but i felt you brought out the gender bias in this kinda stuff. its so easy to dislike a male narrator, but it all changes so quickly when we realise its a she. |
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