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ErinRua
Joined: 22 Jul 2003
Reviews: 1
Location: Out West, USA
Mon Jul 21, 2003 10:24 pm
Rachel !
Hellooooo! I don't think I ever left you a proper review to this piece, in which case I am overdue! Shocked smiley face Please allow me to say that I found this to be a very well-written and enjoyable little story! The exchange between Aragorn and Boromir was delightful and I could "see" every moment. You have a special gift for believable dialogue and the careful sparring between these two - ending on such a good note - was something I really liked reading, and that I have read more than once. Gosh, if I'm supposed to add something critical, I guess I'm blowing that deal, as I can't find any nits to pick! Laughing smiley face Well done!
Cheers ~

Erin
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Mon Sep 15, 2003 3:53 pm
You truly have a sense for these characters. I felt like a third companion, sitting there, watching the clouds. Listening to them reminisce. It was lovely, and I especially enjoyed your revelation about Thorongil's sojourn in Minas Tirith. A sleek bit of canon thrown in there serves as both a testiment to your canon knowledge and your sense of who these men are. One question, and it's really just curiousity: did the stewards of Gondor not enjoy longer lives than normal men? Or had that already paled in them, over the generations?

Fabulous piece; thank you for posting it and letting me peek.
 
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