Reviews for "Mind Games"

Mon Nov 22, 2004 5:06 pm

Intriguing peek into the thoughts of a much-underused and oft-misunderstood character. I especially liked the attempt to explain that whole "Arwen's fate is tied to the ring" thing from the movie. It baffled me at the time, and I'm not sure I understand it completely now. Why did Sauron show her the sea, when he knew she could not cross it now that she was mortal? Just to taunt her? How deliciously cruel. Twisted Evil smiley face

Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:23 pm

Interesting idea, and it does make sense in a way to me that Sauron might use Arwen to get at Aragorn and vice versa, all in some twisted game to get his own way. I have to agree with Viv though. The 'fate tied to the ring' thing in the film prompts a wtf smiley face

face from me, though this fic does sort of explain some things to do with that. Anyway, it is a nice piece and, again as Viv says, it is good to see Arwen taking centre stage in a story.

Thu Dec 02, 2004 8:10 pm

I always appreciate a good Arwen story. It's a little intimidating to write about her because so many people dislike movie-Arwen. Personally, I love her. I enjoyed this glimpse into her mind. I agree with Viv and SpaceWeavil. I understand a little better how her fate is tied to the Ring. There were a few mistakes that you might want to correct, but nothing really distracting. The quality of the story more than made up for any typos.

Tue Dec 14, 2004 4:47 pm

Again, as with "Distant Maiden" you've really found an interesting gap moment in the narrative to explore. Your evil Sauron certainly finds Arwen's achilles heel, as did you - very convincing.

I missed some of the lyricism of "Distant Maiden" however and, one small note, your use of the modern word "morph" jarred me. Maybe a little tightening up? could make this a really terrific work.

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