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JennnLee

Joined: 03 Nov 2003 Reviews: 28
Location: Orlando, FL
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Sun Jul 20, 2003 9:38 am
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| What a sweet story! I enjoyed it very much - the interactions among old friends, the secret love affair...a very entertaining read. There were a few things editorially that I would suggest be done differently, and a couple wrong word choices (a bowstring is pulled taut, not taunt, and Legolas was wary, not weary...) , but overall I enjoyed the story immensely. |
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Kendra

Joined: 01 Jul 2003 Reviews: 46
Location: USA
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Sun Jul 20, 2003 12:19 pm
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Glad you liked!! It was fun to write something so light and silly. Also thanks for the headsup on a couple things!! Just goes to show that no matter how often you and another look something over, you can always miss something.lol Thanks again!!
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 106
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Fri Jul 25, 2003 7:24 am
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Sweet, warm and fluffy. Just the right amount of leavening I needed after the depressingly large amount of angst I have read. Lovely  |
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Kendra

Joined: 01 Jul 2003 Reviews: 46
Location: USA
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Sun Jul 27, 2003 12:30 am
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Thank you, B! I understand the angst deal.lol I love it beyond belief, but every now and again I enjoy something totally fluffy, sweet and silly. I think that's why this little fic seen the light of day. The Elves needed a bit of fun the day I wrote it.
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BellaRue
Joined: 11 Nov 2003 Reviews: 14
Location: Las Vegas
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Wed Nov 12, 2003 9:01 am
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| That was a great story! I was just so disappointed when I looked at the description and it said, "Story Complete." I was like no! That's the only downer, I guess... |
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
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Sun Jan 25, 2004 6:53 pm
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| What a perfect gem of a story. It is amazing how your characterizations of the different Elves (and Aragorn, Elf by marriage) were accomplished in such a short story. My only complaint, which is me being greedy, is that the story ended. However that is the hallmark of a truly great story, leaving the reader hanging for more. |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Mon Apr 05, 2004 4:12 pm
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| Sequel! I want a sequel! lol Please? This is such a sweet little tale and I find myself wanting to know just how Legolas and his love plan to outsmart Thranduil. *vbg* |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Thu May 06, 2004 9:39 am
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A very sweet tale! Warm and fluffy, it was lovely! I agree with Duchess - sequel! Please???
Mona
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