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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
Location: 
Fri Nov 26, 2004 3:26 am
Oh wow.....I was left QUITE breathless after this story! Amazing, truly, and I adored the twist. What a wonderful portrayl of Elrond and Celebrian as young lovers! Ah, it was beautiful, to say the very least! Bravo!
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Fri Nov 26, 2004 8:11 am
Delicious. It is so wonderful to see them young and happy. As usual I love your descriptions. Very rich.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Fri Nov 26, 2004 9:45 pm
The actual smut was lovely, but what really impressed me was the lead-up. I was never a hundred percent sure when she figured it out, but after a while it became subtly obvious that she was playing along. And the game itself was stimulating; the dialogue was fantastic. Good stuff!
 
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JaneDoe
Joined: 19 Nov 2003
Reviews: 8
Location: My own little world
Sat Nov 27, 2004 12:03 pm
If this is what happens when you get inspired, I have to arrange for this to happen more often.
 
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FairlightMuse
Joined: 14 Jul 2004
Reviews: 14
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Sun Nov 28, 2004 2:44 am
Whoa! That was really good! I love the game they were playing, and of course, the smut was kinda hot too! Very Happy smiley face
 
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linweseregon

Joined: 16 Nov 2003
Reviews: 43
Location: North of the River and south of the Sun
Tue Nov 30, 2004 1:26 pm
Fab, what a lovely portrayal of the young lovers. If only JR hadn't died we might have got more of them.
Love the way she plays along with him - very sexy Razz smiley face
 
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003
Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
Tue Nov 30, 2004 3:43 pm
Mysterious ... and such a treat! Like Viv, I'm not sure when Celebrian realizes who she's talking to. As a matter of fact, I would've thought the moment Elrond opened his mouth she would've recognized him and was playing along since then. Dialogue was very dynamic and entertaining ... and the smut was a plus! I really appreciate the idea that "old" married couples have the greatest time in the bedroom Very Happy smiley face .
 
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003
Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:26 pm
A sparkling gem of a story. Great verbal foreplay between Celebrian and Elrond.
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Thu Dec 02, 2004 4:31 pm
Nice twist. I did not think of elrond as such a rascal, thought we do see some hints of humour in his remarks to the hobbits...
Lovely scene. Nice to know the lovers are getting a good time. Smile smiley face
 
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Cuthalion

Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
Mon Dec 06, 2004 8:09 am
Very, very good. Would you allow me to translate this? I run a site for excellent Tolkien Fanfiction (here: http://www.cuthalionsbogen.de), and I'm sure my german readers would love to see this. BRAVA!

Cúthalion
 
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