Reviews for "Merethesgal (A Masquerade)"

Wed Dec 22, 2004 5:50 pm

I really enjoyed this. You used wonderful imagery throughout the entire story, and you were very descriptive *ahem* Wink smiley face

I also liked the dialogue. Great read! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Jan 16, 2005 11:55 am

Well, it seems all your previous reviewers have already stated the obvious, so this will on be a re-enforcement... Wink smiley face

Quite clever... Smile smiley face

you have a great sense for detail!

Bird

Fri Feb 04, 2005 7:47 pm

A beautiful discription of lovers. Playful and witty. Quite captivating!

Sat Feb 26, 2005 1:27 am

Oh, What an intriguing story. A great read

Fri Mar 25, 2005 1:40 pm

Wow - I think I almost broke a sweat on my upper lip there for a moment. Lucky Celebrian to have such a mysterious lover for a husband. I am kinda looking at Elrond in a whole new way now! Wink smiley face

Mon Nov 21, 2005 4:00 pm

The short story of yours gives me that genuine feeling that Christmas is coming. Like a dance, Celebrian falls for this mysterious masked stranger and somewhere down the line, and oh so incredibly cleverly written, she knows it is Elrond. It gives me the warm fuzzy’s to see this warm love between Elrond and Celebrian: for me you portrayed it so wonderfully.

Also, in such a graceful style you picture such a lively and real scenery to me. For example, when both lovers were in the room alone, I somehow felt you brought the reader there as well. This all with great detail and a grand narrative style: incredibly well done! For me an absolute must read before the holidays! Thanks Space, for sharing this wonderful story with us!

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