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Khamul

Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Wed Jun 14, 2006 1:59 pm

Nice phrasing, and good use of words. I'm not talented enough to use "big words" in a poem. I can only make it funny. Rolling Eyes smiley face
Anyhow, quite interesting.
I liked the line,
"The thrill, it keeps you young inside,
Closer to the next day,
Keeping your hopes on high,
It's wilder than your any dream,
You're just trying to survive"
 
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