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Silreth
Joined: 07 Jun 2003 Reviews: 15
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Tue Jul 22, 2003 10:47 am
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| Beautiful story. Great depiction of Legolas and his awe. I was awed myself. |
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Tue Jul 22, 2003 7:59 pm
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| Lovely use of language, and thank you for writing from Gimli's point of view. I loved especially the metaphor of a stone forest, and Gimli's secret worry then delight when he realized that Legolas did indeed share his joy at the sight. The tense slipped into past in a couple of places, but any editor could fix that in a snap; there are no major flaws with this piece. Very nice. |
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 106
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Wed Jul 23, 2003 5:54 am
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| Lovely interpretation of canon. Inspired by just a few words, you have presented a beautiful study of these two characters, their relationship and friendship, and the differences between them. Very readable, nice flow and gorgeous descriptions. Well Done! |
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Hathor

Joined: 10 Jun 2003 Reviews: 52
Location: Lancashire, England
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Thu Jul 31, 2003 10:14 am
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| Wow. It's so nice to see Legolas/Gimli non0slash interaction, and this fic was beautiful. Absolutely brilliant. |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Thu Feb 26, 2004 11:42 pm
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Well, Erin, you're also included in my list of fav authors.
Beautiful. |
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Tue Mar 30, 2004 4:29 pm
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| *gasp* This was absolutely perfect! *thrilled with all the realistic and detailed descriptions* Tolkien himself would be proud of your extended version of Legolas' visit to the Glittering Caves! *vbg* Well done! |
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Sat Jul 10, 2004 9:05 pm
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What a finely detailed tale. I most enjoyed Gimli's surprise and Legolas' awe at the sight. Wonderful description of Mahal's work to create an underground forest with crysatl stars and a ringed lake included. Great look at friendship and trust.
Well done indeed.
Minna Seth,
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Sun Oct 17, 2004 1:48 am
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This is a lovely peice of writing. I very much enjoyed reading it.
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Sun Oct 17, 2004 4:30 am
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| *stands speechless, in awe, not daring to break the silence that surrounds her. Pausing, bowing in acknowledgment of the poetry that spills from the hand that penned this work of art; silently thankful for the sharing* |
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DarkElfChilde

Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Reviews: 29
Location: I'm located somewhere
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Sun Oct 17, 2004 10:24 am
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I would like to thank you for this wonderful work that you shared; I sincerely enjoyed this piece. Bravo!
Your friendly elf,
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